Thursday 18 June 2015

Who's Maverick - 13 June Scribed by James

This is Maverick the kakapo

He is from the forest and has very few kakapo friends because his kind are near extinction.  Maverick wished he could fly but he was too heavy, in fact, the kakapo is the heaviest breed of parrot in the world!.

Maverick loved klimbing. He klimbed trees, kliffs, walls -  anything, because, his amazing hooked beak was ideal for klimbing. Maverick didn't need to climb all the way down , the last bit of the klimb he could drop, because he used his wings to break the fall.

One day Maverick got annoyed about the fact he kouldn't fly, so annoyed he muttered a lot of bad words to himself. He was fuming! He was like a bomb, armed and ready. Then, Maverick heard a noise, it grew louder and louder. It rumbled and grumbled and roared!

Maverick's curiosity took over, he looked up to see a plane climbing high into the sky. This left Maverick in a day dream watching this metal flying bird. In the end , Maverick discovered he didn't need wings to fly. Because his wings were there.

Maverick found an open bag and looked in to find food and snacks. He krept in and then snap! The bag zipped shut, and waved side to side. He was almost sick. Once the bag stopped swaying, he found himself in a great big container. It was weird! There were panels where light came through and nothing else. He, Maverick the kakapo, was in a car. It started to rumble and started to roar. Then to his surprise, it didn't go chomp and turn him into Kentucky fried kakapo, instead it started to purr then leapt as it shot off in first gear. Maverick started to tremble and started to panic,but as soon as he got out of the bag he saw featherless and coatless monkey-things. He was awe at the size of them comparing to him stowed away in the Kathmandu bag.

He learnt that these creatures were humans and they were not going to eat him.then he came to a place where there's so many creatures and then he heard a familiar noise it was the giant metal birds yet there was ten of them all lined up with different kolours and with little kars loading them up with fuel and bags. Maverick was watching and then the bag got picked up and he went under a seat and a
loud whirr and people chatting and baby's crying then whoooooosh Maverick was shaking and trembling with excitement that he was about to fly.

3 comments:

  1. James nice storyline about the Mighty Maverick the Kakapo. Im looking forward to hearing about all his adventures. Just a quick teaching point for you in regards to spelling. What other letter makes the K sound for words like klimb, kliff? Hopefully that helps if not get each other to read and edit each others blogs before posting.......

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  2. hi Mr B its my apologies about maverick being cheeky he likes spelling with K instead of C.

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